Ansoathyst's poems (really weird)

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  1. Admiral Ansoa

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    i used to think of poems but i was too lazy to write them with my hand on a piece of paper, so i am writing them here yay \.3./
    walking, under the moons light, going, when i never enters anyone's sight, doing, what gives me delight, not knowing, if the future is bright, remembering sure is painful, but giving in is like going down the drain hole, when you helped a soul that thanked you later, then hurt it and made it never trust you like a hater, that soul you love will just move on, because of your actions it will be gone, it'll keep ignoring you day by day, until it gives up that it doesnt want to stay, you feel lost, even though you swore to protect no matter what the cost, and as you move on in life, you'd wish you stayed on the edge of the knife...
     
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    Are you going through an Emo Phase or something? Also, what type of poem is this supposed to be? Free verse?
     
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    nah i am just writing deep $#+! that i think of randomly, and yes its free verse
     
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    "Hello @Ansoa,
    That poem sounds Emo,
    But at least you aren't trash like me,
    That mains Teemo..."
     
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    form the moment you thought that hope was dead, i said i'll just live along with it instead, the poors almost died laying on their bed, with no one wanting to give a slice of bread, no body felt or wanted to share, they'll just suffer and while i wouldnt care, even if i am in a place i cant bare, all of this suffering crime and misery, why would it it happen isnt a mystery, no one is really this bad, but the way they think just makes me sad, dont think that everyones life is so happy, might as well live it and just call it crappy, people still say that i cant do rhymes, but that doesnt mean i cant makes them many times, a lot of rhymes were done over and over, stfu or i'll hit you with the word clover >:v
     


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