Vetrix's Comic-

Vetrix

Vetrix

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As some of you know, I have been creating a comic this past week.
At the moment I have only created the storyline, what characters I want and the 1 page prologue XD
Also note that unlike Rude, I dont use colour, I hope you guys enjoy this ^_^
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Give me feedback in the comments below, thanks for reading ^_^

EDIT: Woops, it seems that I didnt put the full title in XD But Im still deciding on what it should be called.~.
 
Oddy said:
:eek:
Maybe you and Rude could work on a comic together? ;)
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I don't know if that is going to be possible XD
TheRudeWolf said:
Seems interesting. I would however give you some advice.

1. Specify which direction the comic is read. Mine is following the Japanese style of right to left and I assume that most of the forumers are accustomed to that.
2. May want to use a pen for the dialogues. I am being picky here, but it is rather difficult to read with the occasional light pencil touches.
3. I have noticed that on the lower half of the page the frames are congruent and that may throw the readers off on the direction the story flows. You may want to look out for that. ;)

Other than that, I am VERY excited to see your masterpiece my fellow manga enthusiast friend! :smile:
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I was rushing to get it out on the forums cause I had to go to sleep XD
I'll try to use pen, but if I mess up then it will get messy .~.
Aardwolf said:
That spooked me too death, 100/10 WONDERFUL COMIC COMRADE.
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YOU WILL BE APPEARING SOON COMRADE
 
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